Poetry – Day 1
Day surrender to night
night surrender to light
sun surrender to moon
the same way
bride surrender to groom
love and hate
both are great
hate surrender to love
love surrender to hate
fight with the wickedness
not with wicked
surrendering is not loosing
it is what you are choosing
parents surrender to children
animals surrender to forest
beginning surrender to end
the same way
life surrender to death
Thank You for reading ❤
Kripi
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Love the analogies and how you define surrender. Thanks for playing along with us at OctPoWriMo!
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Thank you for appreciation
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Hi Kripi. Lovely poem and rhyme scheme. I love how you chose to portray “surrendering” in so many different ways, and how there is a juxtaposition involved in so much of it. Great job!
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Thank you Jesi 🙂
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A fine start there. 🙂
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Thank You 🙂
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